I want to push this paper back to you to give you a second chance to work on it.

I want to push this paper back to you to give you a second chance to work on it. Be sure to truly tackle the objectives of the assignment. I think you tackle a few extraneous items instead of the objectives. When you return it to me, I will grade it for a higher score.
Here are the objectives again:
For diversity of investment, however, an outside financial advisor is recommended. Evaluate the characteristics sought in your financial advisor.
Assess the risks associated with investing in securities through your financial advisor.
Evaluate the forms of protection and regulation you seek from the financial advisor you choose.
Explain the parameters of your plan that will enable you to have the capital necessary to provide you with income for your retirement.
Reach out to me if you have any questions.
Please edit the headings to reflect the objectives for clarity.