Hello there, I already have the essay writin to my liking but I know it could be

Hello there, I already have the essay writin to my liking but I know it could be way better in a sense. My professor wants me to follow a certain rubric… I have it linked in the files. If you can please edit or rewrite what have, mostly edit what I have into that format. I’ve also sent in a draft to my professor to show what they said, to see if you can please fix my mistakes!
Please make sure any adjustments are in your own “Words” please ! Thanks you for ur help !