EDITING UK ENGLISH!!! I have already completed it, I just need my writing edited

EDITING UK ENGLISH!!!
I have already completed it, I just need my writing edited to sound more academic
i have had to complete an assignment which is broken down into two sections, they are labelled part A and part B. In section A, i have had to complete a data anaylsis on excel figures. i need this to sound more academic and lesswordy. In part B, I have to complete a brand analysis and comparison. The main brand is ASOS and i am comparing it to BOOHOO. However, the main focus is on ASOS. i need this writing to sound more academic and more fluid. The word count for each section is 1500, totalling 3000. I have gone over the word count for PART A so I will need assistance cutting it down, and I am not over the word count for part B however if it feels like I am repeating myself/waffeling/using the incorrect academic language I would be really grateful for the help. Overall, I need my assignment to be edited with academic language and made to sound better. Thank you so much!